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Cyn Lee
There is one thing
that I want done
it's how I want
to make you cum

I'll lick my lips
and kiss your thighs
you grab my hair
and I just stare
into your eyes
while I go down
your throbbing hardness
my mouth has found
to lick and suck
on you so much
to flick my tongue
and make you cum

Thrust you inside
my mouth so sweet
you're moaning loud
almost complete

With one last thrust
you cum so hard
did you think
I'd go that far

Swallow it whole
how'd it feel
to know that I
just made you squeal!!!!

© 2004 Cynthia Lee
Shawn
Sorry Cyn Lee, but that was a little bit too much, even though the rhyme and rhythm were nice. Let me see what I can do about setting up a special board for erotic poetry so that only people interested can view the posts.
Cyn Lee
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My sincere apologies!!!
~Cyn Lee
akhtar
spoil sport
Shawn
there's no need to apologize. I would like to see about filtering the erotic poetry posts from the main 'recent posts' link, though. I apologize for any inconvenience.
Cyn Lee
biggrin.gif Thank you much!!!
~CynLee biggrin.gif
AquaPoet
yeah, it was a bit graphic. Me, personally wouldn't have gone that far, but it was aiight.. Read my poem, it's called KISSING YOU. I think it's nice 1 of my many works of art
Harley_Cowgirl2000
i like your poem, i just sent it to boyfriend overseas and i know he will want me to do the same to him
wickedladyoh
I think it was great. tongue.gif
JasmineG
Somebody said to graphic? Wht not if love is wild?
SHA~SHA
FULL OF DETALIS NICE
CautionTheMC
That was beautiful. Very erotic and harcore. Keep it up sweetie.
Unknown
To steal a line from an old rock and roll song, "I think I love you!".

Seriously, that is every man's fantasy. Thanks for reminding me I'm a man!
monitor


that was great, love the way you put it together,i have to agree with the last guy you make me very happy to be a man. rolleyes.gif
Strngr73
Hey Cyn,
Caught your poem about head games, it was a kick.


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