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*sniff*
I know this is shitty. But I'd like some reassurance!

Hi Gemma,
I don't think it's brown at all!

You have constructed a 'short story' which is very readable, to the point, and highlights a topic we all will have to give more consideration to in the future.
I am surprised there has been so little poetry written to talk about aspects of terrorism - do we fear reprisals?
I must admit that I now tend to move away from the religious aspect, because it seems to me that the terrorists have hi-kacked a religion only to further their aims.

As I have said somewhere else, I wish the terrorists would ask themselves, 'why, if commiting suicide and killing others is so glorious, why don't their leaders have a go'?

Bye for now.

I really liked it, very powerful message you send to the reader!!!
~CynLee