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LocoJay
From the Heavens above in majestic praise,
to the earth below set apart for the day.
From riches to rags Jesus did descend,
the creator, the entity of holyness for us became sin.
Tempted and put under strain in ever way,
set apart to endure it all, all judgments on Him paid.
Sorrowful even to the point of death ,
how strong His love was and is for the lost,
Entered He on the donkey, palm branches down, He wept,
He satisfied the debt forever, His life , His all in all was the cost.
Knowing His hour to come, and what was to take place,
lovingly he let Judas's betraying kisses fall onto His face.

Betrayed murdered slayed, spit on whipped upon His back
the hated rejection felt, never was there slack.
Mocked by the ones , ones unworthy to call Him King,
His love still not changed, as he submitted to death's sting.
Brutally nailed and pierced alive, Jesus the Christ hung,
all the world's hate and crimes on His soul were wrung.
Pain unbearable he beared on that, the cross,
outsretched arms opened, calling to the lost.
He pleaded "Father Forgive them, they know not what they do"
for everyone ,and for all of us, not just for the jews.

The skies and heavens darkness hastened,
the earths, oceans and moutains shaken
they cried out surely this is the Son of God ,what have we done,
the enemy knowing now the victory , victory Jesus the Christ had won.
A spear thrust into His side, unbelievable shock that He had already died,
on the sixth hour passed so did His Spirit,
enough startling the govenor did so fear it.
Another soldier to check his breath, discovering Him already well past death.

Laid in the tomb, so torn beyond the recognition of a man,
sealed and closed off for good, with soldiers outside on stand.
His own enemies remembering His saying that He would rise again,
yet His loved ones scattered dejected , they're faith now 'caved' in.
The bright host of the most High God, and the broken sealed grave,
the Angel of the lord sat atop the stone-coffin where Jesus previously laid;
His message was " He is not here; for He is risen, as He said",
the only ones now laying, the soldiers terror-shocked as if dead.

Appeared He did to ones who had, and had not held on,
great joy to hear, Jesus the Christ has risen began their unrythmic song.
Now with authority over the heavens and the earth, Jesus
lived each day according to His Father's will, from every moment of His birth.
Leaving His words with those He loved, promsied another from above,
wonderful counsoler and HolySpirit a friend and comforter to all who hear it.
He ascended to Heaven, the father, after the promise that He gave
"and lo, I am with you always, even to the end of the age." Amen.
gemma
I suppose I deserved it.
LocoJay
We all have doubts at times, and I've struggled alot with my faith.. There
are a lot of hard questions we can't always awnser.. This life really has been
corupted because of sin , we reap the consequences even for others mistakes sad.gif.
But the one thing that is always good in a decaying world is the Love of God,
He loves us , He gave all that he had and gives us hope in Him... Eternity
is a lot longer than this life, Romans 8:28 says "For God works out all things
together for the good of those He loves and are called according to His purpose" ,
He's called everyone to Himself through Jesus Christ and the price that He paid.
Paul the apostle, Jeremiah the prophet and many other people from the Bible
suffered sever persecution and plain out hate and rejection and yet it wasnt close
to that Of Jesus... He gave up His one true love, He was seperated from His father
and went to the lowest because Of His love for us, Hebrews says we dont Have
a high priest who can't sympathize with us, but He indeed bore it all on our behalf
so we could find comfort in Him.. Misery is hard to take, and honestly I can't
say Ive had overflous amounts of it, but pain sometimes is the only way our
hearts are softend to God.. I have many loved ones who It makes me cry to even
think of what has happened to them and continues to happen to them, but one thing I see is there joy, that through it all their love for God increase because they
cling to Him in those times. One day everyone will have to give an account of their
lives before God and the Bible says He is the Holy and Righteous avenger, He will
deal justly with everyone. God delays His coming because of His great mercy and
love for the lost.. I am glad He has, without Christ I am lost and He is my everything no truer love is there, I love Him because He first loved me.
I hope and pray that you find and come to that peace He gives through Jesus,
Hes calling to you and everyone, He loves you and sees your hurts and pains
and promises joy everlasting and friendship neverending. My life has been
marked by grace, I am a loser in the worlds eyes but I am a child in His
thank you Jesus. Godbless everyone~
gemma
I guess I have to see something to believe it (maybe it's just that I was born in the show-me state. But probably not.)

I'll find out what's true when I die.
Meklo
Well it was different. Not something I'd write about.
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