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burnout_00
can we change for the better?
can we only get worse?
can we change things with a letter?
with a simple song verse?

is there any point in protest?
are we just wasting our time?
is there even any reason?
can we change the rate in crime?

have you noticed any difference?
i mean lately, anyway
are we getting any better
or are we dying everyday?

is there any point in writing?
is there any point in fighting?
is there any point in reading?
is there any point in living?



rhymer
hi burnout_00

An excellent set of questions, beautifully set in poetic form!

My answers would be:-

Yes No Yes Yes

Yes No Yes Yes

No No Don't know Yes

Yes Yes Yes Yes

Best regards, Bill.
Meklo
I quite liked it. Nice rhyme scheme which flows well. I didnt like the bit about crime rates, that didnt fit in very well with the rest imo.

Id appreciate if youd comment on mine too.

Thanks.
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