cool and pushy
the wind woke
the day's away
into the night
it sang of a bitter bite
with fangs of frost
and ice
and snow
pushing into my thoughts
i look for emptyness
and find nothing
but biting wind
and garlic shrimp.

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Interesting concepts and thought process' of the mind that strung this piece together, well.

Good job.

Ha! This touched a spot. A tight spot! Great!