I can sit on my chair all day only,
Just stirring my ideas in my head,
Watch the clouds canapy over my head,
And the bird flutter by,
I can dream of who I can become,
And who I will meet,
But, these dreams don't get me anywherem,
Yes, I can dream,
But, would I be acting,
Would I be making any difference,
Sleep is like a death,
THese dreams contain influnce for knowledge,
but they are close to life

Many of wonder and wonderment within this peice.

Did you intend question marks on the end these two lines, "But, would I be acting,
Would I be making any difference,", or were they, merely rhetorical?
Just wondering.


Nice job.

feels like a spontaneous poem. often the best type.