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heather
Simple attraction…..

It starts with a simple attraction
Sometimes friends is the only intention
Something happens, something changes
Feelings of the heart rearrange
The way I feel, I can’t explain
But I know it’s not the same
The feelings I have, I know I care
But the way I feel, makes me scared
You are who you are and that’s just fine
Wouldn’t change a thing- besides make you mine
When I’m with you, I feel free
For the first time, in a long time, I can just be me
Thank you for always being there
It’s so nice to know that someone really cares
I hope I can be everything you want me to be
But I hope you realize- what you get is what you see
I don’t make promises that I can’t keep
I usually try to get out before I’m in too deep
This time is different, I just don’t know
As hard as I try, I just can’t let go
So as I sit here with a loss of words
I hope you understand what I’m trying to say with no regrets afterwards.

Leeann2144
GReat poem very true! It was very touching and very well written! Keep writing your awesome at it!
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