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roachman1215
Sitting alone.
Your pictures on the wall.
The memories
Of your voice,
Of your laughter,
Forever held
Deep within my heart.
Waiting...
For your next letter,
For your next call.
Waiting for you
To end my tears
And to end my pain.
Waiting....
For your love
To bring me back to life again
If only for a few moments.


James M. Guzman
lover_with_wingz
soul very beautiful! ;D :'(

Thanks so much.....




My Love is yours,
~Angelita~
Try
Wow! I think your poetry has improved alot, but hell, what do I know?! The last two lines are excellent, it's kind of a twist by using "If only for a few moments." I like it alot. And the whole "Waiting.." thing. I admire you, always seem to be writing from the heart.

*Sunshine paradise* KG xx
roachman1215
Thank you so much. I have so much admiration for you, too. I hope you're doing well....and I'm glad to see you here.
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