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TheLonelyOne
Now that wishing for death is popular I guess I'll let it go
Now I know everyone hates everything just like me
It almost makes it pointless

When everything goes wrong
Every love
Every feeling
Taken away in the blink of an eye
And just falling more and more away
Day by day
How should I feel?
Why will no one tell me how to react

People think they know how the mind SHOULD work
So let me know

I'll grow up in a world of hate and pain
Where "humanity" is what keeps you inside

All the kids want to die
Their parents put them on pills

All the parents don't know what they are doing
The pills they save for themselfs their children steal to get high

The world is coming to and end
And thousands of people are ending their worlds now
Windowmaker
A very sad reality in many respects. You conveyed your thoughts well. You have a knack for going against the grain in your poetry that really works and is enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing!
TheLonelyOne
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