im not a poet, im just writing this for my GF on V-day. plz tell me what you think along with any changes or revisions i should make. i want it to be perfect so im open to anything people have to say. thanks

Baby

I think of you every single day
since the first moment we met.
You were the most beautiful girl i have ever seen,
you stopped me in my tracks.
And on that special night i knew,
that Baby, I was in love with you!

Holding hand in hand along that sandy beach,
getting lost in your eyes every time they meet.
We lay in the sand, your head on my chest.
We just stared at the sky and just admired the stars.
And on that special night i knew,
that Baby, I was in love you!

You lay on my bed all tired and sweet,
i remember just looking at you and how you made my heart beat.
The butterflies only grew in numbers until our lips first met
and that will forever be a moment ill never forget.
And on that special night i knew,
that Baby, I was in love with you!

Now here we are together again,
sitting at our valentines dinner.
You sit across all stunningly beautiful
reading the poem that i wrote for you.
And Baby on this most special night,
i know, that i will love you forever!

This being your first write I wouldn't change a thing. I would suppose it is much more endearing coming from you...from your words. Well done. I suppose that she loved it.