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+Steven Curtis Lance
Paris Moon

Her face a fly's eye view my vision marginalized
Multifaceted multifoliate fractalized
She had a high I. Q. I knew as I realized
I had embraced her face fascinated until dawn
Then misplaced her grace until breakfast ...when she was gone

O midnight morning why must you fade away so soon?
We will always have Paris but I prefer the moon

+Steven Curtis Lance



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GregM
g`day steven, you have been busy…..

this verse has a quality i very much enjoyed…

it is as looking thru a window to your very soul, mysterious with a depth and understanding of life staring at death….unafraid and accepting but none the less sad…

outstanding lines worthy of any anthology of modern works…

O midnight morning why must you fade away so soon?

your best!





+Steven Curtis Lance
Hey thanks, Cousin Greg; you really get it, and get me. I find it most gratifying to be gotten.

Respect and solidarity,

+Stevie
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