+Steven Curtis Lance
Jun 03, 2007, 03:51 AM
Paris Moon
Her face a fly's eye view my vision marginalized
Multifaceted multifoliate fractalized
She had a high I. Q. I knew as I realized
I had embraced her face fascinated until dawn
Then misplaced her grace until breakfast ...when she was gone
O midnight morning why must you fade away so soon?
We will always have Paris but I prefer the moon
+Steven Curtis Lance
Copyright MMVII
GregM
Jun 05, 2007, 03:04 AM
g`day steven, you have been busy…..
this verse has a quality i very much enjoyed…
it is as looking thru a window to your very soul, mysterious with a depth and understanding of life staring at death….unafraid and accepting but none the less sad…
outstanding lines worthy of any anthology of modern works…
O midnight morning why must you fade away so soon?
your best!
+Steven Curtis Lance
Jun 07, 2007, 03:32 PM
Hey thanks, Cousin Greg; you really get it, and get me. I find it most gratifying to be gotten.
Respect and solidarity,
+Stevie
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