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TheLonelyOne
Your eyes scream
Your lips beg
Your hair stays calm
Your nose loves
Your hands touch
Your arms hold on
Your legs wrap around mine
Your toes are left out

Eyes screaming for love
Not asking
Demanding
Telling me everything I have to do
It's so simple
But I avoid them
Out of laziness

Your lips beg for mine
They cry to me
Tell me the things they would never tell a soul
I listen to them
Their kiss makes me feel like I'm in a different world entirely

Your hair doesn't listen to your eyes or lips
It remains calm and cool
Laying gently on your head
Falling
Exactly where it’s supposed to be

Your nose loves to touch mine
It kisses my nose every chance it gets
It’s greedy
But luckily it found the perfect nose to be greedy with

Your hands touch my cheeks softly
Holding on whispering to my lips
They aren’t too far away
Whispering sweet nothings
Across the cheek
Telling them all the things they long to hear
Making them miss your lips while they are away

Your arms never let go
Holding on as if they let go
They’ll never get a chance to hold me that way again
It's dreadfully romantic
Your arms make my whole body feel safe and warm

We play
Your legs wrap around mine holding on to one another
Loving each other without our consent
What would we care?
The least they could do is stop trying to hide it
It’s obvious
Like the rest of our body
The rest of you and me as people
They’re in love

Your toes cannot touch mine
They are spending too much time
Getting cramped or staying on their side of the bed
They watch the rest of us as if we're their own little movie
I don't believe they feel it
They’re left out of the picture
But what a beautiful picture it is
Highguy
this peom takes me back to when i had that someone.....


hold on to the love u have.
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