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TheLonelyOne
If I told you
That I wanted to last forever
Would you think of all the ways
All the reasons
That I would lie?

If I told you
The story of my life
Would you listen?
Through all of the bullshit
Would you care?

If I tell the truth
Will you scold me?
Will you hate me?

When you tell me you love me
I belive it
When you ask me if I belive it
I don't hold back
I care
About everything that happend to you
About every pain you had to feel
I have shead tears
Just because the thought of your sadness
Brings me into a depression I don't know how to explain

I sleep at night
Wake up in the middle of dreams
Heart pounding
Feeling like your right next to me

Your perfect
Because you let me into your heart
Let me hold on to you
And you didn't hesitate
You held me right back
And let me be afaid
You understood
You let me be myself when noone else would
You held my hand
You never want to let go
You would do anything for me
And I feel like I havn't done hardly enough for you

I know I'm not perfect
But when you look at me
When you smile at me
I feel like there is no one
That could possibly be more beautiful then I am
At that moment

roachman1215
You've grown so much as a writer!
You expression of love is simply beautiful!
I am soooo proud of how far you've come with your writing.
You great!!!!!
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