Sweating desire
inhales new sketches
with mind's pen
on the pillow
image by iamge
night passes
not knowing
how a hazy sun
rose from the sea
--R.K.SINGH
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A quick but neat poem. You're very good 
QUOTE(WithTeethBabe @ Feb 05, 2007, 05:43 AM) 
A quick but neat poem. You're very good
Thanks, withteethbabe, for your appreciative comment.
R K
Very nice. I agree with the other comment. It was interesting, even if very short!
QUOTE(Meklo @ Mar 10, 2007, 04:15 AM)
Very nice. I agree with the other comment. It was interesting, even if very short!
You are welcome. Meklo
R K
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