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LostItAll
When I feel like I have nothing
When I feel like happiness is just a game
When I feel alone
When nothing works
When I want to fall

You're there

To give me love
To make me laugh
To hold my hand
To make it work

You catch me

People ask
"What is love?"
I know now
Love is a who
You are love
My love

I love you
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Ninjah
I like it happy.gif
very good
TheLonelyOne
Indeed he stole it from me!
LostItAll
QUOTE(TheLonelyOne @ Apr 16, 2007, 08:29 PM) *

Indeed he stole it from me!


stole it from you??? you gave it to me!
it was from you to me. and I felt the same, so there tongue.gif
TheLonelyOne
i didnt give it to you so you could post it like it was yours!
LostItAll
QUOTE(TheLonelyOne @ Apr 19, 2007, 09:56 PM) *

i didnt give it to you so you could post it like it was yours!


mwuahahahahahahahahaha!
Highguy
well....to whoeverdid write it .........it was good.

and i would love to hear more.
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