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TheLonelyOne
She opens her arms
Wide enough for love
To grab her up and spin her around
She would smile and laugh
So she opens the crossed arms
bearing her heart
Throwing it out into the open
With no bones to cover it
She cuts her wrists
On the pointy walls
That laid to both sides of her arms
She almost knew they were there
She knew love would end in pain
Shows how much she knew
So as she falls to the ground in pain
She realizes that she spent all that time
Covering her heart with the bones
Fearing for her life
Fearing for her heart
In the end... love cut her open
The things that once protected her
Would end in her downfall
LostItAll
you still have the poetic flow, dear.

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