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Wrong Turn Eternity

I took it to be for eternity
But eternity disappointed me
Taking a very wrong turn for the worse
Decreasing the size of my universe

Eternity might have been a few years
Some love some laughter and quite a few tears
Some unforgettable memories too
I lost you but did I ever have you?

Nobody has anybody ever
Eternity it turns out is never

+Steven Curtis Lance



Copyright MMVI
Hey Hey
QUOTE(+Steven Curtis Lance @ Dec 11, 2006, 10:02 PM) *

Wrong Turn Eternity

I took it to be for eternity
But eternity disappointed me
Taking a very wrong turn for the worse
Decreasing the size of my universe

Eternity might have been a few years
Some love some laughter and quite a few tears
Some unforgettable memories too
I lost you but did I ever have you?

Nobody has anybody ever
Eternity it turns out is never

+Steven Curtis Lance



Copyright MMVI


Hey, I came back to this, and again, and again. Steven, you wizard of words, read what you have written. The more times you read it , the shorter it becomes. Magic. The truth.
+Steven Curtis Lance
"Nobody has anybody ever"!

Thank you, my dear friend.

I know you know, and I love you for that.

Respect and solidarity,

+Stevie
misty_tears
this piece is excellent...repetition really works to achieve purpose...technique is so important...you mastered it in this work.
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