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WithTeethBabe
I'm not afraid of the dark,
The dark is afraid of me,
I'll never swim into tomorrow, I seem to have lost the spark
Pleasures all around with empty blackness just like the sea

Well I stand here wanting as always
And singing in more ways
I'm your sheep in the flock you've lead astray
Saying more than beauty could ever beg
Listen to your prayers inside my head
Play the bass on my guitar, and the hear the drums of your heart
I seem to be helpless caught in the spider's web
Help me free myself, help me to feel again

Well I stand here wanting as always
These days
Just go on,
For you,
How could I possibly know what to do?
The adolescents of the disease
Are not listening to you anymore
Waves say the word please
And you are evil's whore
Just let me take a look at you closely
Maybe, just supposedly
You do feel for them
But not for me
That feeling died a long time ago
So go back to your little self-obsessed world, black as coal

+Steven Curtis Lance
This is a powerful and a profoundly moving poem. I was deeply touched and entranced by it, and found meanings on many levels.

Respect and solidarity,

+Stevie
WithTeethBabe
Thanx a lot, that really means a lot 2 me.
WithTeethBabe
Thanku very much
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