analogues

silent as the firmament of orbs
the celestial image of time adsorbs
indiscernible guises of the world beneath
appear, revolve, attract, for power bequeath
caressing swathes, a cortical sphere
wherein elusive mindfulness so near
these, enigmatic analogues by design
super similarities of nature’s shrine
the one, the all, dimensions, much less, still more
when scrutiny will end, the postulate is awe

©2006 Hey Hey

Exquisite, with the best possible final line, which line is now my favorite among all your many lines:

"when scrutiny will end, the postulate is awe"

These words ring inescapably true, and I cherish them, as I cherish you, my friend.

Love across the sea,

+Stevie

Absolutely beautiful. Outstanding write

I really appreciate your wonderful responses dear misty and Steven.