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misty_tears

Nov 29, 2006, 06:21 AM

Wrap around
This silkiness
With in his golden brown
Those emerald roses
Begin to bloom

Fallen down
With in white
Their love lust
Creates a feathered blanket
She can slide upon

Up and out
In and over
A sweat cloud of mist
Replenishes
Her blue grey soul

Beside and through
The crimson moon smiles
While their love lust
Retires
Now their souls
Are anew

Entangled with an angel
When I am with you

+Steven Curtis Lance

Nov 29, 2006, 07:27 PM

Very nicely imagined and realized, with a quite satisfying finish, my dear friend and fellow poet Misty. The title is perfect and perfectly delightful, reflective of the poem itself.

I very much enjoyed this poem.

Respect and solidarity,

+Stevie

Hey Hey

Nov 29, 2006, 08:11 PM

I agree with Steven, imaginative with a great title and coinciding ending.

supani123

Nov 30, 2006, 06:09 AM

oh!
the autumn leaves the colored leaves.yet is remembered for ever
supani

ahem

Jan 08, 2007, 08:29 PM

this was posted at www darkpoetry com/dp/10370/89469 on October 25 by user LiP Stitches
(spaces in url added to be allowed to post)

Culture

Jan 09, 2007, 10:44 AM

QUOTE(ahem @ Jan 08, 2007, 08:29 PM)

this was posted at www darkpoetry com/dp/10370/89469 on October 25 by user LiP Stitches
(spaces in url added to be allowed to post)

It seems that there is a bit of plagiarism going on here. I thought that perhaps misty was just posting under another name here, but as it turns out there are now two instances with separate user/nicknames.

Moderators please investigate and take care of this matter.

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