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WithTeethBabe
Give me strength I'll adore
You're my drug that I cannot ignore
Holding on to the edges of the blade
And scrape the skin through to thoughts

Out of sight, out of mind
Am I lost? Will I find?
Him, if he could hear me
My thoughts are so dearly
Beautiful, I can never stop thinking of him

Drifting into the void,
I drink all day, to block out all the noise
See the colour of the stars
And I'll suffocate or fly to mars

Hold the book of suicide in your hand
Read the first chapter and take your stand
Maybe the blade is not what it seems anymore
Well I'd rather die than be the devil's whore
Out of sight, out of mind
Feel you seep like softness so fine,
See images of you in my head
And wish away the night, that I was in your bed
Holding back all the stabs in my eyes
That makes my soul cry
Sleeping gently
Holding it all inside
With my pretty eyes
And the past just leaves me tied.
Colour me with sea of blue
Tell me what the hell else I can do?
I've given up trying to cry
While the numb feeling inside me doesn't want to die
Snatch it all inside my hands
While the moon and the stars expand
Hold the word in the sphere of my tears
And the rivers have their misery
Your power to make me feel alive
It's more powerful than anything I've ever tried.
So don't leave me.
And stay with me forever.
Now.
Hey Hey
What a great ... song.
WithTeethBabe
How did u know it was a song? Seriously coz it was.
Hey Hey
I don't know, but I'd like to hear it to music.
WithTeethBabe
Thanku. Me and my friend are actually considering making up a band of our own. And if we were a band I think some of our songs would be similar to this particular poem.
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