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Frail one can you hear me?
Frail one where are you?
Frail one can you hear me too?

Well I speak like the devil's letters he wrote to me
And I see with these eyes of green
And I only come out at night
Just to witness the pretty sight
Of the shadows reflecting by the trees

Frail one you're so beautiful
Frail one oh how I want you
Frail one what else am I supposed to do?

Well you look at my tears on the floor
And you tell me that you want me more
But I know you won't
Because you don't know that I exist
But I will be there for you
My mind will take me through
To the sweetest borders of your beauty

Frail one I want to feel you
Frail one, they all hear but they never listen to me
Frail one, lead me to the shores
As you age
Day by day
I want you even more
Frail one take me away, that's not just what I want you to do
Frail one show me love in such a way
Frail one with your hair so black,
Frail one I'd look out for you,
Frail one I'm always at the back
The back of the crowd that I'd cut my insides open
How I crave you how I want to
Kiss you and taste you
While you lie on my purple bed
Frail one you're always in my head
Frail one I'll love you even when I am dead
If my insides were motions of the shadows
That I see
And if my heart could beat, it would blow you away just like the sea
The sea that you belong to
The sea that saves you
When you most need saving

But I could save you
If you wanted me to
Because I believe in you
Frail one skin white just like the moon
Frail one I'll be dreaming of you soon
Well my heart is like the rain
It never stops, and it has no personal gain

So now I want you
How can I get you, help me save you
But you are the
something I can never have.
But I'll never stop wanting you.
Lilithdemilo24
Hey there Holly, (theif) I love this one even though the original seemed better cos you write it on paper, it's still a pleasure to read. Intense and ornate. x x x
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