Well the smiles on my face
Are as fake as the medication I take
I can hear your voice like a heartbeat
When my best years were destroyed and were so sweet

Mother won't you hear my sobs
The night calls out for you
While I drink from acid liquids
I just don't know what else to do

So carry on tempting me
Please do more if you must
The only thing that helps me breathe
Is the taste of this lust

I see your beautiful face on screen
I see how girls swoon at you
Some girls just disagree
Some girls feel it too
And now what I feel for you
Just gets flown away

Just carry on tempting me
Tease me like the moon
I just love to hear your exotic voice
And see your beauty so soon

When my knees turn into water
And my mind just washes ashore
I'm no longer a lamb in this slaughter
I am all yours.

"So carry on tempting me
Please do more if you must
The only thing that helps me breathe
Is the taste of this lust

I see your beautiful face on screen
I see how girls swoon at you
Some girls just disagree
Some girls feel it too
And now what I feel for you
Just gets flown away "

Hmmmm. I WONDER who you could be talking about? Excellent anyway, I used to write similar poems about David Boreanaz. x x x x

Nice write!

Perhaps try not alternating between using contractions.