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TheLonelyOne
I hate it
I hate me
I hate how I'll never actuly do the right thing

I hate me

Theres somthing you should know
...I don't know what love is...
I thought my love was with you
But how could I do that to you?
Put you through that pain
I'll tell you just how much I love you
And then in nothing but a moment
Tell you the opposite

All I do is hurt you
I can't tell you the truth
Not without tears
Not without a fight

Why can't we work it out
Why do I want to give up...
Why do I find myself crying
Everyday

I'm happy with you
And then I'm sad
This relationship is confusing
We work though everything
But when I think of the things you've said...
I hang my head and cry

I had a dream of nothing
But my own blood falling to the floor
Not coming from a scratch
But my eye

Tears of blood flowing
Falling onto my feet
I wanna sew my lips shut
No never kiss your perfect lips
To say another hateful word

I'll never be the one for you
And knowing that kills me

The thing I once called a heart
Is falling to peices without you
...But staying with you...
Seems to only make things worse for us

The tears we shead
The things...I....say
I wanna die
Puttytat89
wow dude this is so heart felt i love you man don`t worry everythin will be ok you guys just need to talk about it
Ninjah
I love this poem.
It's fantastic.
It's exactly how I feel so it makes it that much better.
My boyfriend and I just went through that whole battle and now we're over.
And we are better off as friends

I LOVE IT!!!<3
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