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NightCat
She would suffer, but as a day went by
An angel spread it's wings to fly

"Kill me! No purpose in a world, for something that is not worth anything!" the girl yelled

This is how we fall on a sword
As her words from her crimson lip mouth stopped

So did the world.
Goldenmasque
Hey this is a great poem, Jesus Mary and Joeseph! It;s very powerful and dark - love it!
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