Old age shivers lot
Sliding towards setting sun
very Sulking parents
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Today a dry leaf
Till yesterday ever green
Autumn’s victory
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Faltering old age
Shuttling between progeny
Decried sympathy
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Father at one city
Mother at a distant place
Fortune divides them
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WAILING PARENTS
WAITING FOR PHONE CALLS FROM YOUNGS
WHO LIVE AFAR
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This was beautiful, I could hear this echoing after reading, wonderful.
misty

very nurture-nature supani. you have the way to say

Hello my friend and fellow poet Supani...

I hear a genuine cry of the heart within these lines, and feel a very real and poignant urgency which is most compelling; your poetry speaks from your heart to mine, dear friend.

Thank you for this and for all you give us.

Respect and solidarity,

+Stevie