selina
Jun 07, 2006, 07:10 AM
looking through the glass
past the fingerprinted pane
his smile illuminates
Hey Hey
Jun 07, 2006, 07:46 AM
these are lovely words. (I think the last line has 6 syllables but who cares when the poetry is so beautiful? Please don't change it)
selina
Jun 08, 2006, 08:34 AM
yeah i know it is supposed to be 5 7 5 but i am too much of a novice to get across what i want to say and follow the rules at the same time--despite my efforts!!!
Hey Hey
Jun 08, 2006, 01:15 PM
don't worry. your words were great.
Guest
Jun 09, 2006, 01:01 AM
excellent write,
misty
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