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TheLonelyOne
The burn in my eyes
The driping posion rolling
off my beautiful toung
The Hammering blood boiling pain
that rises into my skull

Is this red longing...this unexplainable..
Frustration...that you'll make me feel

Say a word that I hate
That just makes the shots...

They poke through your skin slowly
while the flesh rolls back and your eyes
Go white from the pain
The mind washing pain

Shots of my anger will go thru you
And they will hurt and startle
You'll feel the hate
You'll jump and run

and yet you'll never truly know

What just hit you
GregM
g`day, tlo, strong verse well done, for me it leaves just enought mystery to challenge to reader,

""and yet you'll never truly know""

excellent. keep well greg
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