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I wish life could be as sweet as a cherry
as bitter envy will suffocate the very demon within me

Let this smile be your light
and hear the words of a ghost

Do not tell me i'm wrong
or that i need help the most

The roots within my mind
are too strong for my soul
As i start to feel again

But do not tell me i'm not growing
towards the very light of heaven itself
Meklo
Interesting. I liked the way the rhyme came and went there, good stuff. Subject matter was ok, but perhaps a little too vague.
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