Mandy Wood
Apr 20, 2006, 06:55 AM
Worn Road
i've barely begun to travel down this worn road
my body still aching from the last
my heart still limping
i'm going as fast as i can
trying hard to put the weight back on both feet
not to let the hurt consume
but i want to suffer through each step
to make the journey worth it
i want my heart to swell like my ankle
and when i reach the end i'll rest then
+Steven Curtis Lance
May 02, 2006, 11:04 AM
Indeed it is nice work, Manders Flanders! Lolly is right, and I'm glad she found it and replied to it, so that it's moved back up the board again. I remember reading it and enjoying it, relating to it when you first posted it, but I was so busy writing my own stuff and dealing with other--far lesser!--websites that I didn't reply until now. I apologize for this, and for not replying to so many good poems of so many good poets. I am learning that the more time I spend here at BrainMeta, at home as it were, the happier and more grounded I feel; as you know, there are a lot of absolutely horrible poetry sites out there. Yowza!
I'm just glad you're here, that I'm here, and that there is a here here, for all of us.
I always enjoy your poetry.
Thanks and love,
+Stevie
Hey Hey
May 02, 2006, 01:06 PM
just fine stuff, as always. more please manders.