Guest_misty_*
Mar 28, 2006, 02:39 AM
Siphoned light gropes passengers
Hopeful for luminescent hearts,
Arching underneath bombazine drapes
Dusted with passionate legacies
Of original sin and the primogeniture son,
Wicked for nighttime plots savouring
Spicy love, exponential in a vivid darkness.
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supani123
Mar 29, 2006, 02:45 AM
DEAR MISTY
LET US WEAR THEM TO SHIELD OURSELVES FROM
HOT HUMIDITY OF THE SUN
AND ALSO TO KEEP US AWAY FROM WITNESSING NASY HAPPENINGS
GOOD GREETINGS
SUPANI
Hey Hey
Mar 31, 2006, 04:26 PM
Hey, this is really good misty. A surprising change of style. (Not surprising that you have changed your style, as you do this often, but this change of style was a surprising change - wow, I've even confused myself now!)
GregM
Apr 02, 2006, 05:57 PM
g`day misty, very good, so full of contradictions, so delightfully obscure in nature, i love your pieces like this, well thought out and leaving enough material for the reader to be challenged. keep well and please continue your night time plots….. take care, greg
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