TheLonelyOne
Mar 27, 2006, 07:29 PM
Life is going
Round and round
I don't know how to feel
But you always tell me
You play to ruff somtimes....Its starting to hurt
Before the yelling...
I actuly belived I was beautiful ....for a moment
You forget about me
You fight with me
Somtimes you get mad at me for other peoples mistakes...
That hurts as well
Do you even really love me?
I'm parionoid
When you don't call I feel forgoten and alone and lost
When your angry I feel worthless
When your sad I blame myself...no matter what you say
But when your happy I feel like I could fly
The times when you look at me in the eyes...
With your beautiful blue ones...
And tell me you love me with that smile on your face
I feel like I'm in another dream...
I'll wait
Forever
Just for the moments...
When you truly LOVE...me...
Don't leave me
+Steven Curtis Lance
Mar 28, 2006, 01:06 AM
Hello my friend...
They say "love hurts," but how I hate to think of you being hurt like this and in such pain; and yet I know that everyone who loves hurts at one time or another in some way.
It is not for me to judge, but this love sounds so sad. Your poem is very good; it is often the saddest which are the best.
How I wish love were not so painful! I wish you love without pain, and peace.
Respect and solidarity,
+Stevie
Guest_Lilithdemilo24_*
Apr 01, 2006, 03:01 PM
Your poem was deeply affecting. I felt your pain when I read it, my hat off to you for a masterpiece of truth and beauty. I look forward to more.
Hey Hey
Apr 05, 2006, 12:37 PM
this is it
you did it
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