Neurosail
Mar 21, 2006, 10:13 AM
Beauty is
Beauty is feeling the emotion of the souls
Devoting everything to our goals
Smelling the fragrance of your hair
Sensing the love that you share
Hearing the steps that you take
Enjoying the sounds that you make
Tasting the wine of your time
Drinking deep inside your prime
Seeing the splendour in your eyes
Gazing at the windows in your mind
Touching the skin on your face
Kissing the lips of your embrace
These sensations that I feel when you’re near
These senses that we share and hold so dear
That is the beauty of the love
The beauty that is love
[©2006]
elektrobank
Mar 21, 2006, 02:35 PM
"Beauty is the canvas you paint
That turns a sinner into saint"
A real breath of warm summer air, lovely sentiments, imagery and flow. Could read it time and again. Respects Andy
Guest
Mar 22, 2006, 09:36 AM
nice work your to, I love the ending.
misty
Neurosail
Mar 22, 2006, 10:16 AM
Thanks Misty and elektrobank (Andy) for your kind words.
Someone at work said "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" and that made me think maybe there is more to beauty than just that.
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