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supani123

Feb 10, 2006, 02:16 AM

Love, the song celestial
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Ever and forever
I speak of love
I chant about love
I pray by all means for love

Till the sounds reach
The sky above and
The mud below
And up till the stars
Sizzle brightness around moon
And as long as the spring
Showers greenery in spring
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Guest

Feb 15, 2006, 02:29 AM

nice...very well worded,draws the reader in and makes them feel what you're feeling. I liked it a lot. misty...

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