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TheLonelyOne
Somtimes
Somedays

I feel like you DO love me.

But tonight you have shown me that I was wrong
You don't love me with you heart
I was so wrong
You love me with your dick
I was so wrong
I thought we were having fun
I was so wrong
I thought you wanted to be WITH me
Not on me
I
Was
So
WRONG

You've lied to me and proven it
You told me if I said no you would stop right away
You lied to me
I was wrong
I don't know right anymore

Good-Bye
*TheWrongOne*
Guest_Michelle_*
I liked it, some good stuff DUDE! Keep writin

Peace out
Guest
im really feeling this poem...i can really relate to your feelings...that you for this.
TheLonelyOne
yeah woo me I still find myself loving him...no matter what

yeah woo me I still find myself loving him...no matter what
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