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Whisky Girl
there you are Miss J
With big brown eyes that look the same

You were once a shining beauty of awe
Now your soul can seem nothing but sore

Is this what amphetamines can do to you?
Shut out a soul and your freedom too?

Love deep down can not be described
It can only be revealed, and not surprised

The years are your days
And the days are your years in many ways
GregM

g`day, an excellent read, particularly
"The years are your days
And the days are your years in many ways"
well done, take care greg.



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