GregM
Jan 13, 2006, 04:15 AM
the sands at swansea.
with the smell of the sea tumbling
in the violent breeze, awakening memories
as the morning sun rises to greet the day
i walk
the melodies of wish you were here resonate,
drowning the sound of the surf crashing upon
the beach where we laid, once rejoicing
i walk
the stench of rotting seaweed permeates about,
around, as the last hint of night dissolves
with an apologetic final lingering look,
i walk
the dawn will come and i will walk.
greg
Unknown
Jan 13, 2006, 04:26 AM
You play this out so elegantly. I felt like tiptoeing through it. Melodic and smooth.
Beautiful.
misty..
+Steven Curtis Lance
Jan 13, 2006, 05:27 AM
G'day again, dear Cousin Greg, and good to see you here on the poetry board, where I spend most of my time hereabouts.
Misty's right about this poem, and she's one of our very best here, so take her word for it.
(Note to Misty: Greg's my cousin from Hobart, Tasmania, Australia! I'm so happy he's here now!)
Welcome to the poetry board, mate. I look forward to hearing a great deal from you. Soon everyone here will know what I have known for years, that you are a most refreshing and utterly unique poet, as well as the finest cousin another poet could ever have.
Cheers and love,
+Cousin Stevie