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TheLonelyOne
The other day he told me...just how great he thought i was
All i knew was the fact that im not.

Another day went and he told me... how beautiful he thought i was
All I could think about was the fact that im not

Yesterday went by...and he told me everything he loved about my personality
All i could think of is the fact that im just another girl...

Today was another day just with no words...
He held me in his arms till the sun came up

Tommorow i started to think about everything he could think of

The Next day past and i relized how everything he said...
Was coming out of my mouth to him as well

3 days later and its for sure... I Love him


I trust him
LostItAll
It's me!
I held you!
I told you that you are wonderful and beautiful and great!
yay! you love me!
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Puttytat89
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