misty
Jan 04, 2006, 04:06 AM
Blue tin eyes dim blink
crystal lullabies to freeze
plastic harmony...
supani123
Jan 05, 2006, 12:55 AM
misty
beautifully expressed
supani
Unknown
Jan 06, 2006, 04:55 AM
Thank you sup for your kind words.
misty..
+Steven Curtis Lance
Jan 06, 2006, 01:24 PM
I think you've really got the hang of this haiku thing, Misty!
Works for me, in any case; striking imagery and use of elements: "blue tin eyes," "crystal lullabies," and "plastic harmony." Very striking, and linear in its way, as a circle is a line; there's a sense of process here which I like, of going somewhere and arriving, to go around again.
I like the way you do the 'ku.
Love,
+Stevie