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Nikacordato
My inner depths of depression
Outline this heartbreak of deception

Lies of yesterday, bring back the past
When I thought that we would last

The crash of frustration builds in darkness
My roads are blocked and I'm aiming for the pointless

Tears roll down as I take this blade
Put it on my wrist and carve your name

Let go of the anger, let go of the hate
Because what occurred was undesirable fate

I look in the mirror, what I see
Is lost stranger staring right back at me

I am with shame, I am with disgust
With people I once had now I have lost trust

So blind these eyes, deafen these ears
And wipe my face of these blood heaving tears

Forget about the memories forget about the smiles
Forget about everything I thought was worth while

Because through it all, the hurting and pain
I will rise once again through this agonizing rain
Hey Hey
powerful words portraying powerful emotions.
+Steven Curtis Lance
It really is a good one, Nika; the title grabs the reader, and the poem which follows doesn't let go.

I can certainly relate to the feelings which you express so well here.

Love,

+Stevie
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enjoyed this because it really conveys the need to escape and creatively with an interesting tone. it doesn't leave me sad or content, maybe a little numb, ironic as it is. good write.
that last line: yeah, i know that feeling. beautifully put.
misty..

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