rhymer
Dec 03, 2005, 04:00 PM
Here I stand at the end of a line
A line that goes back right to Adam.
I hope he'd be proud of what I've done
And my ancestors too, God bless 'em.
supani123
Dec 03, 2005, 04:32 PM
dear rhymer
all men are mortal
i am a man amongst them
i deserve the mortality
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
your poem to be recited at the evening of our lives
truly yours
supani
Olga
Dec 05, 2005, 03:36 AM
| QUOTE (rhymer @ Dec 03, 04:00 PM) |
I hope he'd be proud of what I've done
|
I am sure he is!
Unknown
Dec 05, 2005, 06:29 AM
Awsome write. Opening line was cool too
misty..
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