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street walking

of course, the beginning of the day
for once might not reflect the end
and, whatever they might say
won’t necessarily help toward the mend

see me, stagger along the lane
a tortuous route to find the only way
shame, it ‘s still the same refrain
spending life with blue to make me pay

this snow, so pure in falling white
then darkening on my head
see comrades, also in this plight
but close their eyes instead

street walking, holly, ivy in the air
smiles overlaid by dirty face in glass
look around, you can see me everywhere
although that of course is crass

©2005 Hey Hey
supani123
DEAR HEY
this snow, so pure in falling white
then darkening on my head
see comrades, also in this plight
but close their eyes instead

VERY NICELY EXPRESSED
SUPANI
Hey Hey
thanks to you dear supani
Olga
Nicely written!
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this read soft in my mind and the last line closed it perfectly, nicely done.
misty..
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