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Misty
show me
your
nirvana
in shades of blue
underwater
green
floating past us


touch me
with
sand dusted fingers
so coarse
it almost
hurts
but I smile
anyway
because
you do
and I drown in the
sparkle
swirling in your
eyes

kiss me
with
strawberry flavored lips
as the
saltwater breeze
sticks to our
skin
past the point of
annoying

but I
don’t care..
for
once

and it feels
great
to just
be..

with you
next to me

~

simply
breathing
supani123
misty
really sweet and lovely too
supani
+Steven Curtis Lance
So beautiful, beautiful Misty; what a poet you are, and growing every moment toward the moonlight, like a pale-shining fragrant and nocturnal flower opening, lifting, rising in the night.

Love,

+Stevie
Mandy Wood
Misty, this is truely beautiful.

"touch me
with
sand dusted fingers
so coarse
it almost
hurts
but I smile
anyway
because
you do
and I drown in the
sparkle
swirling in your
eyes..."

Where do you come up with this stuff. It always puts a smile on my face to see you get better and better with each poem.
Hey Hey
agree with the above. a very engaging poem.
Unknown
Thank you all dear fellow poets...


misty..
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