Misty
Oct 14, 2005, 12:57 PM
show me
your
nirvana
in shades of blue
underwater
green
floating past us
touch me
with
sand dusted fingers
so coarse
it almost
hurts
but I smile
anyway
because
you do
and I drown in the
sparkle
swirling in your
eyes
kiss me
with
strawberry flavored lips
as the
saltwater breeze
sticks to our
skin
past the point of
annoying
but I
don’t care..
for
once
and it feels
great
to just
be..
with you
next to me
~
simply
breathing
supani123
Oct 14, 2005, 03:43 PM
misty
really sweet and lovely too
supani
+Steven Curtis Lance
Oct 14, 2005, 06:13 PM
So beautiful, beautiful Misty; what a poet you are, and growing every moment toward the moonlight, like a pale-shining fragrant and nocturnal flower opening, lifting, rising in the night.
Love,
+Stevie
Mandy Wood
Oct 19, 2005, 01:57 PM
Misty, this is truely beautiful.
"touch me
with
sand dusted fingers
so coarse
it almost
hurts
but I smile
anyway
because
you do
and I drown in the
sparkle
swirling in your
eyes..."
Where do you come up with this stuff. It always puts a smile on my face to see you get better and better with each poem.
Hey Hey
Oct 19, 2005, 03:00 PM
agree with the above. a very engaging poem.
Unknown
Oct 20, 2005, 06:10 AM
Thank you all dear fellow poets...
misty..
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