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misty
A butterfly wings,
A meadowlark sings,
A brown, barefoot boy,and a brook--
The buzz of a bee,
A pink apple tree,
A girl in its shade, with a book.
supani123
MISTY
JUST SCINTILLATING
SUPANI
+Steven Curtis Lance
This is a beautiful structure wherein every word truly tells, Misty; every word is the right word, and the total is greater than the sum of the parts: you create a beautiful scene, and I enter it. In your poem I become the boy, and approach the girl... shyly, but with all the ardor of spring.

Thanks and love,

+Stevie
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