misty
Oct 12, 2005, 03:28 AM
A butterfly wings,
A meadowlark sings,
A brown, barefoot boy,and a brook--
The buzz of a bee,
A pink apple tree,
A girl in its shade, with a book.
supani123
Oct 12, 2005, 04:52 AM
MISTY
JUST SCINTILLATING
SUPANI
+Steven Curtis Lance
Oct 12, 2005, 07:48 AM
This is a beautiful structure wherein every word truly tells, Misty; every word is the right word, and the total is greater than the sum of the parts: you create a beautiful scene, and I enter it. In your poem I become the boy, and approach the girl... shyly, but with all the ardor of spring.
Thanks and love,
+Stevie
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