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TheLonelyOne
It hurts so bad
But i cant hate you
I cried for hours
But i cant hate you
You send me mixed signals
But i cant hate you
I hate everyone
But i cant hate YOU
Why! I dont get it
I've never felt this before
It cant be love im not capable
Maybe its hormones
But they usualy suck
You make me lost
But when im with you
I feel so found
Its probably a pun
But I just cannot hate you
I hate everyone
I guess this is growing up

Im sorry im not everything
You are to me...
roachman1215
Wow! Your writing just keeps getting stronger and deepr. This is such a great poem on growing up and those wonderful, and sometimes horrible feelings we've all known. Please keep writing. I've always loved your poetry and always will.

James
TheLonelyOne
the funny thing is like a day after writing this the guy asked me out lol!
LostItAll
hey! that's me! happy.gif

I Love You.
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