Dancer
Not yes not no
Nor maybe so
Not an answer
No suggestion
Just a question
And the dancer
Dancing unknown
However small
Is not alone
Part of the All
And together
Now not whether
When nor somehow
As karma turns
One candle burns
And the question
Is the answer
No suggestion
Let the dancer
Fall into All
+Steven Curtis Lance
Copyright MMV + Peace
Full Version: Dancer
Unknown says "tumbs down," being unable to spells the word "thumbs," and keeps coming back--as s/he chases me all over the Internet--constantly telling me that I am "a nothing." Therefore I offer a small sampling of what some others are saying, in the interest of balance.
These comments have just come in during the past few moments at AuthorsDen:
Reviewed by J.L. Sharp 7/20/2005
this is a beautiful poem
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/20/2005
Well penned!!
love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/20/2005
Magical words of light heartedness that sparkle with hope and promise. Bravo Steve.
Felix
Reviewed by Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel 7/20/2005
A human's instinct to dance for survival is the best dance of all. Good one!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel
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This comment is from our main poetry posting board here at BrainMeta:
Posted: Jul 20, 01:31 AM
It's simple but it's deep.
misty..
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I just found this at the Poetry Corner on Lulu.com:
very expressive and beautifully put. enjoyed very much
julie
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My dear Unknown friend: Neither you nor I are nothings; we are, both of us, somethings, somebodies, equal in importance in the sight of God.
If I have ever trespassed you, I beg you: forgive me, and leave me in peace.
I wish you every happiness, honestly and sincerely.
Peace and mutual respect,
+Stevie
These comments have just come in during the past few moments at AuthorsDen:
Reviewed by J.L. Sharp 7/20/2005
this is a beautiful poem
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/20/2005
Well penned!!
love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/20/2005
Magical words of light heartedness that sparkle with hope and promise. Bravo Steve.
Felix
Reviewed by Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel 7/20/2005
A human's instinct to dance for survival is the best dance of all. Good one!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel
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This comment is from our main poetry posting board here at BrainMeta:
Posted: Jul 20, 01:31 AM
It's simple but it's deep.
misty..
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I just found this at the Poetry Corner on Lulu.com:
very expressive and beautifully put. enjoyed very much
julie
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My dear Unknown friend: Neither you nor I are nothings; we are, both of us, somethings, somebodies, equal in importance in the sight of God.
If I have ever trespassed you, I beg you: forgive me, and leave me in peace.
I wish you every happiness, honestly and sincerely.
Peace and mutual respect,
+Stevie
This is just a simple little poem about Zen principles.
I make no claims of greatness for it; I simply wanted to post in The Secret Place here, which is my personal board here in this forum which I founded.
When this Unknown says I am a nothing, as s/he always does, it hurts me deeply.
No one is a nothing. Everybody is important.
Unknown friend, you are important. I respect you, and I respectfully request that you allow me my own simple human dignity.
Please?
I ask, with all my heart, for peace.
Love,
+Stevie
I make no claims of greatness for it; I simply wanted to post in The Secret Place here, which is my personal board here in this forum which I founded.
When this Unknown says I am a nothing, as s/he always does, it hurts me deeply.
No one is a nothing. Everybody is important.
Unknown friend, you are important. I respect you, and I respectfully request that you allow me my own simple human dignity.
Please?
I ask, with all my heart, for peace.
Love,
+Stevie
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