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SEASONS OF LOVE
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Querying so much in all sorts, the maddening love
Quenches the unending thirst of the summer shocks

Bare dances of the nude branches of stand erect trees
Woke up the earth yelling the season as autumn the artefact


Tender sheen started making up with waving heads
Welcoming the melodious tunes of the spring ring in sweet hearts


Fall colours bade good bye to the nature’s beauty
Thus inviting the immediate presence of shivering winter in cool cords

All seasons say an auspicious hello to the wor[l]d of love
Negotiating with all negatives to just tread on the path of love!
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+Steven Curtis Lance
Hello dear Supani...

I so enjoy all your poetry, perhaps especially this one.

I love your turns of phrase, and your wordplay.

I especially like "autumn the artefact," and I like the duality of "wor[l]d of love."

You have a style and voice all your own, and we enjoy it here; I am sure many enjoy it many places.

Summer greetings to you from California, my friend and fellow poet. Thank you so much for being such an important and vital part of our poetry community.

Love,

+Stevie
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