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selina
Torpor induces in me through textured waves of thought
Permanent insensibility in my widening state of rot
For better or for worse, my friend, a numbing look from me
Close your head to all that noise for all this apathy

Elation through sedation for my many hungered years
Triumph over motivation spilling over my tears
A blur in the right direction floating adrift in your eyes
Fogged in rhythmic consistancy behind such clever disguise

Soporific happiness in guiding lights I know
And deadening my beaten path for all you did bestow
Heal me, again, in your wonderous hypnotic charm
With consious slumber taking over numb to all the harm
Daisy Calica
Selina,

I love it... I guess the use of punctuation marks would help interpret the emotions you've expressed?

Pleasure reading it....

D
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