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Mandy Wood
SO CLOSE

In silence we sit,
You and I,
My head on your shoulder,
Our bodies so close,
And I can feel your heart,
And the gentle trace of your lips
And the softness of your touch,
I can feel tears hiding in the corners of my eyes,
In this beautiful moment,
When I truly believe that you love me,
When I truly believe that we can outlast,
All these fears and doubts,
And I know, this is it,
This is what I want,
Until by fate’s loving design,
We shall be forever.
Unknown
I wish this could be felt by all humankind. To love and be loved is the ultimate expression of our humanity. Beautifully written Mandy. God bless the child that's got his own.

Rodger
misty_tears
And hand in hand

We can stand together

And take in the view

As one.

Echoing the wonderful Mandy. A stunning write for sure, I adore what you've expressed through this, and how you've portrayed it. Breath taking and heart warming. Incredible work.

misty...
hollywoodsnoopy
Very beautiful. I wish to feel that way as well. One day I will and that day will be glorious. Mandy, you have such a great soul and wonderful way of conveying emotion. Never stop sharing. We love your writing.

Nikki
Mandy Wood
Thanks you guys. I really enjoy the fact that each of you enjoyed this poem. And as always I adore the comments!
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