hollywoodsnoopy
May 22, 2005, 01:03 PM
In lakes reflection
I begin to see
What others don't
Truly see in me
Beauty abounds
In the laughter
I give so freely
Remain true to her
Not always
On my side
I invite others
Along for the ride
Can't shake the feeling
Of a lost happiness
How did I get myself
Into such a mess
Power lives deep within
My spirit, my soul, my heart
Need to tap into that energy
That would be a good start
Only I can escape from
The things that hold me down
No one else can save me
It is up to me now
+Steven Curtis Lance
May 22, 2005, 01:18 PM
Scary, exciting, and true insights, my friend; you express these insights well, with immediacy and strength. I think you are writing well and honestly, and I enjoy reading your work.
Every happiness, every success to you.
Love,
+Stevie
Mandy Wood
May 23, 2005, 10:06 PM
WOW!!!! Nikki I absolutely love it. And if anyone can be her own hero, it's you.
hollywoodsnoopy
May 24, 2005, 03:39 PM
Thanks Manders and Steven. It is nice to have people read your stuff and give a free opinion.
Nikki
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